19. Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. Opinion.
Undoubtfully, computers have become an indespensable part of our technological age. Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient, while others people believe that computers have made life more complex and stressful. In my opinion, the former statement holds true for a variety of reasons.
First of all, computers can support Internet connection. Connecting a computer to the Internet unlocks its full potential. Once connected, choices and available options are almost limitless. On the Internet, there are many social networking sites such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, which can allow distant and convenient communication. Also, thanks to the net, students can get access to a variety of learning courses and plenty of useful references for their studies. Another selling point is that during the Covid 19 pandemic, despite the constant disruptions in schooling, students could maintain their studies by attending lectures on Zoom, Meet and Microsoft Team. Besides, the Internet can be an abudant source of information. Just with a click of a mouse, Internet users can be kept posted about the lastest events that is happening all around the globe. What’s more, it can provide us with a lot of films, music videos and other kinds of entertainment, which is a great way of eliminating stress and tension.
Secondly, computers increase work efficiency. For instance, when companies run their business with the help of computers, they can store millions of documents, financial transaction, check employees attendance, performance report, and video conference with other countries associates.
Last but not least, computers have significantly supported important fields in our life. In the medical field, computers can help diagnose diseases, monitor patients and perform operations. Also, computers play vital roles in the military operations; where most of the weapons are controlled by computers and hence helps in safeguarding the country. Besides, they can be applied in building satellites, thermal plants and defence operation. Computers can forecast natural disasters, hence we can take precautionary steps and timely evacuation can be made to save thousands of life.
To conclude, computers are of paramount importance in our lives. However, if we don’t use computers properly, it can easily spoil our lives. Therefore, it is imperative that every person be a smart computer user.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...documents, financial transaction, check employees attendance, performance report, and vid...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56873315364 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96088914422 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641509433962 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 632.7 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2995366622 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9090909091 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8636363636 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22727272727 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334078874447 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874330788646 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158689755386 0.0667982634062 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201280437652 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217917417204 0.056905535591 383% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.33 Out of 6
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