Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
Obesity among children is becoming a great concern in various nations. In this essay, major causes of this issue are analyzed and effective solutions are put forward.
There are a number of reasons why the rate of obese children is rapidly increasing. First and foremost, this disease in children is attributable to their unwholesome dietary habits. In particular, a vast number of kids fancy eating junk food and sugary drinks. Facts indicate that overconsumption of unhealthy food causes imbalance between the amount of calories in and out in children’s bodies which leads to being absorbed more energy than necessity. In addition, childhood obesity is rooted in a sedentary lifestyle. In specific, with the technology advancements, children tend to devote time to play video games and browse the webs. As a consequence, the excess energy is not released and accumulated in their figures.
Some practical solutions to this problem are encouraging parents and teachers to take more care of their children. To commence with, guardians are recommended to spend more time preparing food instead of going out or ordering food online. Hence, parents could control their kids' diet and provide them with healthy and high-fiber meals. This way, children no longer go to food vendors and fast food restaurants. Secondly, it is significant that physical activities be organized more often in schools, clubs, etc. PE classes and competitions give students a good reason to exert their bodies. Scientific research has illustrated that daily 30-minute exercising helps them steer clear of fatness and other related diseases.
In conclusion, unhealthy diet and physical inactivity are the main causes of childhood obesity. As a result, parental care and physical exercises are required to resolve this issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40780141844 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85797343802 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620567375887 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8724312096 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.7222222222 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16070727746 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048977557695 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0613696340594 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110856751897 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484093655462 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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