Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Many hold a belief that many people have a big fortune that takes a chance of wealthy people to give a hand to others. To the best of my knowledge, this opinion is grounded for the following reasons.
Firstly, it is note-worthy that the level of wealth is accompanied by the increasing charity to citizens. Nowadays, many sociological studies have shown that although it is invisible, the encouragement of surrounded people is a enormous motivation to being rich, because they are aware of the importance of intellectual values. Therefore, it will be a grave mistake to overlook the fact that rich people are inclined to spend their money on giving a opportunity for the poverty's employment. For example, in many countries where local governments and authorities usually go to difficult places to observe their situations and help them improve their life. This example is the illustration of the fact that this activities could show the solidarity of people in develop countries.
Secondly, the counter-argument raised by objectors to this is that social class distinctions may happen when the public have become well off. This argument could be true to some extent; however, it is incomplete. What they fail to take into account is the fact that education about awareness of behaviour in growing countries is carefully taught when people were very young, which is one of the important factors to being rich. Therefore, when people can have a opportunity to help others towards physical and mental well-being, they would fell they are walking on air.
According to the above analysis, we can conclude that the most important thing about wealth is kindness, which is chronic positive effects on social life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many holds'.
Suggestion: Many holds
Many hold a belief that many people have a big fo...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e encouragement of surrounded people is a enormous motivation to being rich, beca...
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Line 3, column 449, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...inclined to spend their money on giving a opportunity for the povertys employment...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...le is the illustration of the fact that this activities could show the solidarity of...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...g rich. Therefore, when people can have a opportunity to help others towards phys...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12857142857 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87473157576 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4728381524 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276262588694 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869351507674 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651058739006 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149052177791 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328856999961 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.