The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph illustrates the changes and differences in the percentage of over 65 year-old people provided by three different countries, over a 100-year period from 1940 to 2040. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were upward trends in the proportions of population over 65 years over the period.
In particular, when it comes to Japan, the figure stood at 5% in 1940 before falling slightly to roughly 3% in the following 20 years. At this point, the percentage of over 65 year-old people increased significantly to 10% in 2020 after levelling off at 3% in 1980. Afterwards, the given graph is predicted to witness a considerable climb in the percentage of population aged 65 years and over to a peak of approximately 28% in 2040, which will account for the highest score.
In contrast, concerning Sweden and USA, the figures started at around 7% and 9% respectively in the begining of the period. Afterthat, the graph experienced upward fluctuations between 10% and 20%. In the year 2020, regarding Sweden and USA, the percentages of over 65 years are going to at about 16% and 18% correspondingly before reaching a peak of around 23% and 25% accordingly, which will constantly constitute the second largest and the lowest proportion at the end of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, regarding, second, in contrast, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91324200913 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95141111121 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552511415525 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.796920433 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195658498196 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929178350387 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710591288167 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144865970953 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721717156923 0.0819641961636 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.