People do not have to get married to be happy, so more and more people choose to stay single. Do you think it is a positive or negative trend?
These days, many individuals opt for living alone, which has become quite normal. From my perspective, this trend is unfavorable because of the following reasons. Firstly, the tendency to stay single increases the rate of people suffering from psychological problems. There is a high likelihood that the unmarried have to cope with numerous strains of study, work, and finance on their own. They do not have close enough relationships to confide in, which leads them to more negative attitudes. A recent study discloses that single people often resort to drugs to relieve stress and many of them become addicted. Secondly, the single lifestyle results in population aging. People who remain living alone tend not to give birth, instead, they spend all their time enjoying their own life. This phenomenon is considered to be a key contributor leading to the decline in fertility rates. According to data from the census, this is mainly attributed to population aging in many countries. Lastly, this trend inhibits economic growth. Some people might say that single life boosts economic growth. Notwithstanding, they are just short-term benefits. In the future, it is predicted that there will be a dramatic increase in the proportion of older people, which will put heavy pressure on health systems. Moreover, a decline in the working-age population is avoidable. Consequently, the labor force supplied to economic sectors will be in short supply. In conclusion, the tendency to live alone causes psychological problems, population aging, and economic crisis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36326530612 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85333273649 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.2359068561 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.2941176471 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4117647059 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176687693927 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475824635431 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525319225403 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176687693927 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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