Nowadays technology is influencing modern art in areas such as design painting and film.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?
In this modern age, different aspects of aesthetics like design, painting, and film are affected by technology. By considering the long term I think that is the positive prone development. This essay will point out the outstanding pros of this progressive tendency.
To begin with, technical gadgets can enhance the creative innovation of people. The reason is you can easily refer to different pieces of art or animation on the internet rely on your phone or laptop instead of you must pay a lot of money to go to the gallery or take part in a skillful class. For instance, I assume you are designing a logo for a company, you can combine diverse styles of anyone, then created the special logo is one of a kind. In addition, the technology will support you contribute to a perfect film, arts, or design. The evidence is these days, there are many applications software are made to increase the quality of creative productions. For example, we can draw both 2-dimension and 3-dimension in Sketchup, moreover, you can adjust simply shapes, colors…in this one, you no longer must make many drawing drafts like a past.
In contrast, besides the advantages of influence on technology. There are some drawbacks we can struggle like lack of the condition to invest the devices. In fact, not any person can buy a computer or smartphone which can support their job. Furthermore, if we didn’t consider it, we would make a mistake. For example, you created a documentary, but you made a movie, which is irrelevance with history, you will be criticized immediately by audiences.
In conclusion, technology is influencing modern art have a benefit. However, during the process, which formed artistic productions, you should consider a variety of aspects to ensure the quality of its.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 583, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'applications'' or 'application's'?
Suggestion: applications'; application's
... evidence is these days, there are many applications software are made to increase the quali...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...here are some drawbacks we can struggle like lack of the condition to invest the dev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97315436242 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90067238322 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2307514632 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9375 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217543709252 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724497451187 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689761486255 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138508720134 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511036709326 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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