Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste. Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Industrialization, which is essential for development of any nation,However, it creates a plethora of problems. It is irrefutable that pollution and wastage is becoming a burning issue across the world. It is cause by many source like rising number of cars in different cities. This essay would shed light on the valid views in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, the first school of thought, fuel,which is used in most of the car emits various harmful, toxic games like carbon monoxide, Sulphur dioxide, nitrogen in the air owing to which air pollution get increases and quality of air decreases. It causes respiratory disease and left long term effect on human body and environment. For instance, according to the survey done by Indian government in 2015,it can be found that, due to more number of cars on the road, the number o asthma patients rise upto 21% around the world.
Nevertheless, according to second school of thought, industrial waste like chemical which are expelled into river which lead to the water pollution is not only harmful for mankind but also for aquatic animals. The waste water get mixed with clean water and people drink this water without any treatment. Moreover, various industry dump waste like meats , plastics on the land, which degrade the quality of soil. For example, a research of oxford university state that 40% of land are fill with the e-waste of mobile phones.
In my opinion, manufacturing waste should be reduces due to which different types of pollution such as air pollution, soil pollution, water pollution will indirectly diminish. To exemplify,50% of wastage is generated because of manufacturing process in all around the world, due to which utilization of all the raw material is not done effectively.
To sum up, I tend to reiterate that although everything has its own significance, nothing cannot be ignored. To reduce the pollution generated by increasing number of cars and industrialization , I would suggest that people should utilize public vehicle as much as possible instead of personal vehicle to reduce pollution and waste.
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| 2021-07-17 | Bansi Patel | 78 | view |
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- Many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste Others think that industries are the ones causing pollution Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1642228739 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94348620553 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0394015864 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221436725373 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697116024577 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643256185758 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123345547736 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312239240204 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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