All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
It is a good idea to give parents options to volunteer time in their children’s schools because it is beneficial for teachers, parents, and students. Though, volunteering should not be required due to time, money, and parents’ situations.
Parents can definitely have a better and deeper connection with their children and also with school teachers when they participate in school activities with their children. For example, parents can see how their kids interact with other students and also with their teachers, so they can know and understand their kids much better. In addition, when parents spend time with their children and show them how important children are for them, it encourages and motivates students to learn and study better.
Additionally, every parent has a different background and topic to talk about and share it with students which can make many opportunities for students to learn more passionately. The parents with nutrition background can talk about healthy ways to eat or even have a small cooking session of preparing healthy meals. This will encourage students to pay more attention to their food choices and avoid junk foods.
However, schools should not make it mandatory for parents to spent their time in their children’s schools. The reason is some parents are really busy with work and do not have time to volunteer. Also, some children may live with their old grandparents who are tired and old to come to school. Imagine students with disable parent who cannot come to school. Other students might ask that student that why he/her parents are not showing up which can make students embraced in front of other students. Those students of disable or poor parents can be mocked by other students which will break their hearts.
It is obvious that volunteering time by parent in their children school is beneficial in many perspectives, but it should be under optional situations not required. The reason is some parents cannot come to schools for understandable reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to schools for understandable reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 11.1786427146 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 55.5748502994 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2260.96107784 75% => OK
No of words: 328.0 441.139720559 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15548780488 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67888935395 2.78398813304 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484756097561 0.468620217663 103% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 705.55239521 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2625293526 57.8364921388 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.6875 119.503703932 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271807477896 0.218282227539 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119306851346 0.0743258471296 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055501681156 0.0701772020484 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186136138105 0.128457276422 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551078474236 0.0628817314937 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.3799401198 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.32208582834 89% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 98.500998004 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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