The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?
It is sometimes argued that taking part in parenting courses plays an important role in children’s development. While many parents can be supported in nurturing their kids by these courses, I believe it might not be the best choice for upbringing a child.
Classes for parenting skills are good ways which help parents bring up children better, especially for first-time parents or young couples. By attending parenting courses, parents might know how to prepare, be ready or give first-aid in emergencies, for instance, when the baby cries and refuses food for many days or he/she is shocked after taking vaccines. Parents are also learnt to manage negative emotions such as anger or anxiety thanks to helpful information from the courses to identify the causes behind every act of children. Furthermore, the classes can create a community, which helps parents to share and get tips from more experienced parents to afford more effective interaction with their children.
However, there are two reasons why I argue against making parents join parenting courses for nourishing a child. Firstly, the courses may be a great idea but not the best option. Instead of spending hours studying in classes, parents can research on the Internet with a plentiful supply of certified knowledge by professors all around the world or ask grandparents and relatives for experience in raising a kid. Secondly, each family has different stories leading to different backgrounds for children’s growing up, so parents have their own methods to take care of their sons/daughters.
In conclusion, I think that parenting courses might be an option but not the required thing parents have to do to have reasonable performances in developing children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26714801444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86728519709 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624548736462 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2878167931 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.636363636 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35929575327 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152588954579 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063625998972 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23467054267 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206598130001 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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