The chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010
The bar chart compares differences in the rate of how physically active men and women in Australia in six age groups are in the year of 2010. Overall, it can be seen that women in middle-aged were by far the most regular exercise while men aged did the least physical activity.
Among all categories, only the proportion of 15-to 24-year-old males was higher than that of females in the same age group, 52.8% compared with 47.7%. Meanwhile, the only identical rate of Australian males and females who were physically active occurred in the category of people aged 65 or over, about 47% in the year surveyed.
We can see the opposite pattern in the remaining categories, which is the woman in these age groups did more exercise than their counterparts. To be exact, the most difference between both genders went to people between 35 and 44 years old, 52.5% oppose to 39.5%. Meanwhile, the percentage of females in the ages of 45-54 and the ages of 55-64 accounted for the highest, 53%, while that of males was 43.1% and 45.1% respectively. The corresponding figure for those aged 25 to 34 was slightly lower, 48.9% and 42.2% in the year shown.
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- Describe The Advantages And Disadvantages Of Tourism In The Modern World 78
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 78
- Many of the cities are currently facing a serious housing shortage What are some of the reasons for this shortage and what solutions can you suggest 89
- Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems Others think that there are more important issues Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.745 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61112523637 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.9996448835 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.625 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159236188542 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744507478476 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100674682287 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126400605878 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120889726155 0.0819641961636 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.