What are the causes of water shortage?how should the nature resources be preserved and utilitied.
The problem of water shortage which was always debatable has now become more controversial with companies people claiming that it is hazardous while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the shortage of water as a natural resource is a great problem.
There are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact is that over population leads to migration and urbanisation which results in creating imbalance and scarcity of resources. Another v pivotal aspect is that mixture of pollution causes global warming which leads to natural disasters like floods, drought and under such conditions there is no water .Hence, it is apparent that water shortage is a global threat.
Steps to deal with this problem are many but the most significant ones are not complicated but acceptable and practical . Besides this , there should be recycling of water and even rain water harvesting is very helpful in storing fresh water. primarily, afforestation reduce pollution and maintain water cycles. Moreover, strict laws should be made against pollution.
To recapitulation, according to the arguments aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the problem of water crisis can be successful addressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, if, moreover, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1163.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38425925926 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88367246259 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634259259259 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3951921225 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.3 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244227007924 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977248473651 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890921234863 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131640700353 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421222898688 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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