The pictures below show the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given picture depicts how to make clothes from recycling plastic bottles.
Overall, the production of making clothes from plastic bottles is a man-made linear progress which invovles 13 steps starting from collecting used bottles and ending with clothes made from fabric.
At the first step, empty bottles are collected by recycling trucks and then these lories will tranfer the bottles to the manufactories. In the plants, the bottles are sorted to different types, cut by a special machine into small species and carefully washed through water. In the next stages, the species are seperated and directly dried under the sun for 10 hours straight.
After completely dried, these species are boiled until melting into dense plastic liquid.The liquid is strained to long thread so that to make the yarn. The yarn is weaved into cloth and rolled to prismatic shape. Eventually, the fabric is going to be used to make into clothes.
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- The pictures below show the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 47, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... first step, empty bottles are collected by recycling trucks and then these lorie...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...until melting into dense plastic liquid.The liquid is strained to long thread so th...
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Line 7, column 166, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'woven'.
Suggestion: woven
...d so that to make the yarn. The yarn is weaved into cloth and rolled to prismatic shap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18300653595 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41598546658 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8885773332 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255265756229 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107184500263 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101238126032 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17806590035 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0996992216996 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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