Some people think that hosting an International sports events is good for the country while some people think it is bad discuss both view and state your opinion.
The graph below show the enrolment of overseas students and local students in Australia university over a 10 year period.
Nowadays, it is believed by marius individuals that hosting and international sports events is beneficial for the nation, while other people argue that it is not bad for nation. I will discuss both view and elaborate it in upcoming paragraphs.
To commence with, International sports event is good for our country because it's bring a various good point for country. Due to fact that people improve their social relationships as well as day participate more in group sports and games. During participates in games they learn basic manners like leadership, sportsmanship, unity and a friendship. Consequently this side is a beneficial for our nation. For example, if our country organised the some games, obviously these games inspiring the individuals as well as people of our country.
But on the other side, it creates a many critical problems as well as genrates some issues, for instance one of the most important reason is a gambling. To exemplify, some people addicted by gambling because they betting on the few games like football ,cricket extra. And spend lot of money on this process, when face failure in this process then also they suicide as well as suicide themselves. This is the main problem of this International sporting events.
To sum up, believe that International sporting events has both pros and cons. On the contrary, if government should considerable well preparing theses kind of events before operating them.
The given line graph illustrate, the information about foreign scholars as well as regional undergraduates those joining in university of Australia during the over 10 year period.
in the first graph overseas students commencing slightly increased at the end of time 400000 in 2010.total number of overseas scholars situated in 20008 continuously increased approximately 80 thousand.
On the other hand, second graph in local students commencing around 18000 in 2001 and it throws nearby 20,000 above in 2002. and then this slowly declined and after this rose in 2008 and again in declined in 2010 at 20,000. Total local student in 40000 at 2001 after this increase slightly in the end of 2010 at 60000.
Overall, local students and roll mint more than total overseas scholars and commencing overseas as well as the local scholar from the lower trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, kind of, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1931.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17694369973 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81360618471 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554959785523 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3136404683 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.631578947 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42105263158 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272698098535 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769509945418 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559202666697 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112223321148 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603473386129 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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