Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree and disagree with the statement.
In many countries,people suffer from various chronicle diseases which puts effect on people health because government have insufficient fund for health.Although many of people opine that government should be spent money on health education rather than prevention,i believe that medical treatment cannot be ignored by the high authority.
On the one hand,there are multifarious diseases can be seen in many countries.Because,poverty,lacking in health budget,overpopulation,unhygienic,poor living standard and unaware regarding diseases . In the other hand,people have know knowledge about how to handle the diseases and which precautions should be taken by individuals. As a consequence,they are praying of fattall diseases, such as cancer,aids,obesity,cardiac disease and diabetes. Therefore,fund should be raised by government for health awareness camp as well as should spend money on health education instead of medical facilities. For example,in during pandemic covid-19 situation,many of countries government advertised regarding how corona spread and it was warned to public do not shake hand others,keep maintaining social distance. So,it was the beneficial for the human being to overcome the virus.
On the other hand, medical treatment cannot be neglected by high authority. First and foremost,health education and awareness can only protect from the diseases but treatment is a method which eradicate the disease uproot.Furthermore,various kind of ailments which may not be vanished by health awareness camps, such as cancer,heart disease etc,it can be treated by the docter.
In conclusion,while people saying that government should provide medical health awareness camps and health education to the civic body,proper precautions and medical treatment plays also vital role to stop the disease.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.08984375 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.4751378579 2.80592935109 159% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3934423712 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.9 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4 7.06120827912 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240920598713 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986811186356 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070107817137 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162927755591 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01306680973 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.34 12.4159519038 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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