Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunize their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunize their children?
It is a proven scientific fact that vaccination is an effective means of preventing various children’s diseases. However, there is a contentious argument over whether that children vaccination should be mandatory or optional. This essay will examine this question from both points of view and then will explain why mandatory vaccination is more beneficial than the other.
There is an idea which argues that matters like vaccinating children should be optional. This is because, it is believed this matter is related to the most fundamental human right which is freedom. People should feel free to decide about vaccinating their children. They must be informed about side effects and benefits then they can make a decision for their offspring to receive vaccine or not. A good example is covid-19 vaccines, these are produced using new technology and their side-effects are yet to be discovered. Consequently, many individuals are refusing to take the shots for themselves and their children because of this ambiguity.
On the other, it is widely accepted that vaccination should be compulsory especially for children. Scientists have discovered that children are more susceptible against various harmful bacteria and viruses due to their incomplete and weak immune system. To make their defense system resilient against different illness, they should be vaccinated from an early age. However, if it is left to parents, they may choose not to immunize their children which will put endanger children’s lives. A good illustration of this is a partially vaccinated school, one of those who are not vaccinated may get serious disease and can easily transmit to others. And then they can carry the virus home and endanger their parents’ life. It is believed it may trigger a serious disease outbreak. As a result, it is vital to vaccinated every member of society including children.
In conclusion I tend to believe both arguments have their own merits. On balance, however, both society and children can benefit more from making children vaccinate shin mandatory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1745.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32012195122 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84686071454 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3215607501 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8421052632 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57894736842 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428254576714 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133747640857 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620896356717 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245648588731 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978868875607 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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