Some people believe that international news should be included in the syllabus of secondary school students do you agree or disagree.
These days, more and more events are occurring around the globe. While only few people in their opinion trust that this is very important to understand these on the same day. Globalisation made people to understand the need of the latest news on the first hand. Some analysts believe that international news should be a part of a curriculum however others refute it.I agree to up extend on my views of ups and downs of this matter by diving deep in to the topic before come to a reasonable conclusion.
It is certainly true that one of the main aims of including international news is to broaden the knowledge of young generation. The majority of the parents prefer their kids are updated with the latest happenings about the global affairs on the first hand at early stages of their education.
Secondly Further, wide range of knowledge would give better understanding of different world culture, social issues, political events, sports. Last but not least with this most of the college students come out of the school with an expanded version of the world events and higher knowledge on current affairs. This will further enhance them to face the world challenges in a multinational reach.
However, there are other local events are pivotal while schooling namely local cultural events, socio economic problems, technological developments, sports and spiritual updates to put into their mind. This benefits to develop a better local social skill to understand the local atmosphere in a different vision. Secondly the children will get distracted from their studies as already burden with many subjects. Moreover, sometime children will interpret news in a wrong way due to language barrier.
To close the foregoing discussion propounds the view that including international affairs in the secondary curriculum has both positive and negative impact, but I strongly believe that the presented views were shown more significant to the topic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20634920635 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74294899905 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5732322945 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.142857143 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173469866382 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482976392847 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577768787893 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850875807463 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552769182121 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.