Directions: Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response contains a minimum of 300 words.
Question:
Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
They say a person never realises the effects of any issue until he himself suffers in the same. Humankind has already caused a huge amount of harm to the animals. Every alternate day we get to listen to the news of some species of the other being endangered or some animal appearing out of nowhere into the streets of a city. Not all humans show empathy towards animals. I take a conditional stand on the same.
Every living thing on this earth needs food and shelter to live. We humans in the advent of new technologies and advancements overlook the fact that even animals need shelter. Deforestation has led to a huge problem for wild animals to find shelter and food. Their habitat is at stake due to the irrespond=sible behaviour of mankind.
Additionally, tons of untreated industrial wastes are thrown in the oceans due to which a humongous amount of water bodies succumb to death. The poisonous metals like mercury mix with water and enter animal bodies. Unfortunately, they have an adverse effect on their health. We see a huge amount of plastic in the oceans which are unknowingly consumed by whales and other water animals. The recent oil spill near Russia shows the sheer carelessness of humans towards this environment of ours.
However, factory smokes are not an exception. They have exponentially depleted the chances of the birds to migrate from far lands during specific seasons. The smog is hazardous for their health and thus most of the migrant birds are endangered today. While Save tiger missions are helping revive the endangered species of tiger, it is necessary that the people stop poaching and encroaching animals for their tusks, flesh, antlers, feathers and more. We the humans can restrict ourselves from buying such items that harm animals too in a way stop this deadly loop.
Undeniably, we cannot starve ourselves for our needs but we can surely look for efficient ways to treat this issue. A wiser approach to meet our requirements and not one's greed. Endangered animals should be fostered with care and given luscious green shelters to save the species. It is high time we start caring for every animal instead of being alarmed at the extent when they are getting endangered. Every living being must have equal rights.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...proach to meet our requirements and not ones greed. Endangered animals should be fos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1874.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 383.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89295039164 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57459524082 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590078328982 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.6204599993 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0833333333 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9583333333 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.45110844103 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0962149392962 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262100951448 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236845096002 0.0737576698707 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529817686254 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00831850435301 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.