Politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensus rather than elusive ideals.
Representatives of a nation are obliged to pursue the public's well-being and the basic standard of life. Furthermore, as their idiosyncrasy derives from the fact that their positions are decided through election, politicians should always be alerted by how much popularity has (s)he gained, which group of people does (s)he represent, and how much influence has (s)he been giving to the society as whole. In other words, politicians should not only reflect the people’s (common) opinion and general tendencies but also suggest the overall principles in order to provide the citizens a clear direction in which ethics the society has to pursue. The essay will provide following examples and evidence in order to support the argument that both practicality and idealism should be equally regarded as important factors in managing one’s political careers.
Admittedly, politicians are obliged to establish a common ground, taking the initiative in resolving possible controversies due to the mere fact that they have been elected through decision by majority. Especially in times of difficulty, it is their responsibility to fulfill the elements of living conditions such as housing, employment, and daily necessities, rather than arousing potential conflicts by countering the public’s common interest. For example, Franklin D. Roosevelt, known by the initials of his name FDR, succeeded in overcoming the nationwide economic hardship during his presidency by implementing the New Deal Policy. New Deal policy allowed him to extend his pragmatism in regards to giving shelter to the U.S. citizens and resolving unemployment. Den Xiaoping, the political head of China in the 1960s has also become a symbolic figure for taking care of the country’s well-being and nourishing the living conditions of the people. Thus, it is reasonable to argue that it is the utmost duty of a politician to take care of the maintenance and economic prosperity of the country.
However, the element of basic living may only be a half answer in evaluating the role of a politician. Although ambiguous ideals are likely to result in further confusion, nevertheless a community can only be stabilized through the ethics that unifies the diverse groups within the society. For instance, without the emancipation proclamation issued by the former president Abraham Lincoln, it might have been difficult to envisage the cultural identity of the United States which underscores that every citizen should be treated equally regardless of one's gender, race, and sexuality. He is known for his firm action in abjuring slavery which, in his time, faced tremendous opposition. While practical survival and well-being of the public are the main factors that establish the basic pertinence of a country, the strength of a nation comes from the fact that the people share powerful ethics.
Furthermore, idealistic goals raised by political leaders can also be a milestone for enhancing international relationships with other countries. Devastating events committed by Imperialists during the mid 20th century gave humanity a significant lesson not to violate the essence of human dignity. While the national value of Japan fell behind due to the fact that they refused to admit their criminal actions against other nations, Germany has become the leading figure of the European continent by fully acknowledging the historical misbehavior and unhesitantly apologizing to their victims. In the midst of the reconciling efforts stood Willy Brandt, who dared to take full responsibility for the past deeds. In this context, we may realize that political leaders play a significant role in deciding the reputation of the nation.
We may conclude now that a balancing approach between pragmatism and idealism in political management shall be required. The former consist of the basic standards of living of the citizens, while the latter stands for the identification and ethics of the nation.
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- Politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensus rather than elusive ideals 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 693, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...cy allowed him to extend his pragmatism in regards to giving shelter to the U.S. citizens and...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...should be treated equally regardless of ones gender, race, and sexuality. He is know...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3341.0 2235.4752809 149% => OK
No of words: 616.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4237012987 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98190197535 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9980311855 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 331.0 215.323595506 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537337662338 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 1058.4 704.065955056 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5183181666 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.260869565 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7826086957 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30434782609 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13364746583 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0320458438264 0.0831039109588 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394132561455 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647102693958 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506493879161 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 203.0 100.480337079 202% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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