Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
The potential extinction of those endangered species may or may not solely resulted due to human activities. There may be some disruption in their habitat due to human encroachment resulting in their extinction whereas some are put in danger due to limited reproduction as well as natural calamities. Thus, I mostly agree to create environment to save endangered species by the society even if the potential reason of their extinction may not be the result of human activities.
Firstly, our greenery earth has global diversity ranging from 2 million to 1 trillion, out of which 1.74 million species have been database so far whereas 80 percent of species have not yet been described till date. Global diversity is measured by the observation of biodiversity and is affected by extinction and speciation. We, humans are the intelligent scintillating and smart creatures among others. Our dominating and infringing nature compel other to be in endanger lists. Human beings practice illegal poaching of animals for their individual benefits of making individual lifestyle better. For instance- One horn rhinoceros has been decimated for their horn to make lucrative uses in cosmetic products. Similarly, nearly 20,000 elephants are killed by poachers to trade illegal ivory trinkets in international markets each year. Thus, society should formulate strict laws and regulations to prevent poaching of innocent animals for people individual benefits and laws should be passed out from constituency regarding illegal trading of animals parts. There should be a sanction of severe punishment if anyone found involvement in illegal trading of animals bodies part.
Secondly, increase demands of goods and services with the increase in population undoubtedly increase pressure on the components of biodiversity resulting in exploitation of natural resources and plants vegetation. Human population is expected to grow from 8 billion to 11 billion by the end of this century resulting in unavoidable damage of biodiversity to seek the needs of daily life. Due to human encroachment in animal’s habitat in the form of deforestation disrupts their natural habitat of living in the form of habitual destruction. For instance- To meet the needs of daily furniture, many jungles are being exploited which results the migration of animals from their natural habitat and consequently of their extinction. The destruction of their natural habitat may contravene in human land results in serious clash of animals and human beings. The increase in population disrupts water ecosystem too as large amount of waste like solid waste and chemical waste are deposited in the sea shore resulting in dying of many sea animals due to poisonous effects of various chemicals. Therefore, society should make efforts to save endangered species by making strict rules and regulations to conserve their natural habitat.
However, there are many cases in which animals are led to the point of their extinction although there is low act of human activities. For example- Elephants give birth to their young ones in nearly 24 months of mating period. This slow process or mechanism of giving birth are leading them in the point of extinction in coming days. Similarly, natural calamities like flood, landslide and forest fire are also responsible for the killing of species in large number or disruption of their wildlife. For instance- The reason for the extinction of dinosaurs which was one of the dominating creatures in Mesozoic era extinguished due to volcanoes eruption and meteorite downfall which are far behind from human interruption. Although these environmental acts are unavoidable but their effects can be minimized by shifting the animals from vulnerable areas to highly preventive zones. These animals can be kept out of danger zones through proper nurturing, conserving their natural habitat and carrying effective scientific process of fertilization to increase their number.
In overall, society should implement effective solutions to prevent extinction of species either there are potential or non-potential means of human interaction or activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 114.0 58.6224719101 194% => OK
Nominalization: 37.0 12.9106741573 287% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3506.0 2235.4752809 157% => OK
No of words: 641.0 442.535393258 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46957878315 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0316973083 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94375301122 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471138845554 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1107.9 704.065955056 157% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9900985348 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.851851852 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7407407407 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.62962962963 5.21951772744 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213613871079 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690165206966 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696417155181 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147978934431 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433151129102 0.0667264976115 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 169.0 100.480337079 168% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.