Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
there has been a growing trend that online-based working and studying are becoming ubiquitous as a result of the technological advances. While many argue that this tendency brings a diverse range of drawbacks, I totally agree with.
On the one hand, many hold the opinion that people should not work and study from home because of some key reasons. First, the schooling of children can not be effective since there is no student-teacher interaction. Hence, student may not be well-informed and can impact on their scores and knowledge. Second,the income of those who work through the internet is unsteady as their salary can hugely depend on their subjects each month. For example, travel bloggers working for magazine company of tourism can earn profits from their review about destinations . If they can write as much as possible, these bloggers can make a large amount of money.
Nevertheless, I always suppose the innovation in technology has several merits for people who are learning and working based on the Internet. First of all, this phenomenon is cost-efficient because it assists students to save a huge deal of money. For instance, the young leaving their house for studying in metropolitan cities use several millions monthly for rented-house, utilities and food. Hence online-based learning play a crucial role in saving money. additionally, working from home helps adults to impede toxic environment due to their colleagues. As a result, they can concentrate their mental condition and make an effort to complete tasks that they are assigned.
Despite the fact that the disadvangtage of working and learning through the internet is undeniable, I support that the benefits of this trend overshadow the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there has been a growing trend that online-ba...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun hold seems to be countable; consider using: 'many holds'.
Suggestion: many holds
...I totally agree with. On the one hand, many hold the opinion that people should not work...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...ct on their scores and knowledge. Second,the income of those who work through the in...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...its from their review about destinations . If they can write as much as possible, ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...y for rented-house, utilities and food. Hence online-based learning play a crucial ro...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to play'
Suggestion: to play
...s and food. Hence online-based learning play a crucial role in saving money. additio...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Additionally
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28260869565 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96111637636 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0245978488 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176080394311 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606435792151 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788873073945 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970134714634 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406498148981 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.