Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. write a letter to the hospital. In your letter.
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
Say what type of functions you would be able to do
Give details of when you would be able for this work
Dear Madam,
With the referring your advertisement I am intended to work as volunteers services under your supervise. Charity begins at home predetermined from the early stages of my father's contribution. Humanity is the best manifesto in our social life to healthcare-related aids among the underprivileged civilians. If I am engaged in the volunteers association, I will participate kind of nursing functions without a remuneration package.
There have diversified procedures which are related to hospitality management, I have attained to numerous Charity organizations as a governor. I can do the vaccination task that is required both physical and theoretical knowledge which the course acquired in 1991. In addition, pain relief management patients have increased gradually due to the Covid-19 pandemic journey, for their challenging jobs I am interested in deploying himself as a guide liner under your hospital.
However, I am a service holder and international volunteers association whether you would allow me a surveillance tram leader to provide me authoritative power or health insurance recovery unit at the end of office hour. On the other hand, I am entirely free at the vacation time especially Friday and Sunday.
I am looked forward to receiving your valuable letter of recommendation in your earliest expression.
Kind regards,
Jane Austen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'volunteers'' or 'volunteer's'?
Suggestion: volunteers'; volunteer's
...leged civilians. If I am engaged in the volunteers association, I will participate kind of...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your earliest expression. Kind regards, Jane Austen
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.85567010309 337% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1159.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57211538462 4.54256449028 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46129472967 2.54303337028 136% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706730769231 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9446622271 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.363636364 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214291956061 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619460647584 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519418032191 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113481901298 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018572514659 0.0580467560999 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 70.7449484536 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.