Some people decide to start their own business instead of working for a company and organization. Do the advantages for people working for their own business outweigh the disadvantages?
These days, people possess distinctive outlooks with regard to seeking a literally lucrative profession. Many people have a tendency to independently establish their enterprise rather than working for any firm or organization. From my perspective, compared to some negligible downsides, being an owner is utterly superior.
Initially, separately starting an own business may give rise to manifold drawbacks in the first phases. It is undeniable that with the lack of practical experience, people may undergo an enormous amount of stress. This is because amateur entrepreneurs must confront a plethora of obstacles from which bankruptcy commonly stems. Furthermore, finding sustainable expenditure from some potential investors is also a problematic issue. In order to reinforce the capital of the company, people are expected to devise attractive campaigns to draw the donor’s attention. That could be a colossal waste of time if the owner does not have a sufficiently profound related understanding.
Notwithstanding, people may still be able to reap several worth-noticing benefits from individually working. It is expected that being an owner immensely arouses people with a lot of motivation. The given duty is deemed to render people responsible as they have to assure their staffs’ necessary incentive benefits, hence the people are productively motivated. Additionally, people are not required to wholly depend on certain companies. With financial self-determination, humans are facilitated to freely make their own decisions in terms of monetary allocation. Also, they are allowed to set up an unassisted schedule without being governed by the supervisors.
In conclusion, despite the unnoticeable disadvantages, with the aforementioned reasons, I do believe that humans had better consider being a genuine owner for their own business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, may, so, still, in conclusion, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79120879121 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38685446765 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663003663004 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.913015552 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0625 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255977362234 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696787665779 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642036541118 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152230667564 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329751057942 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.84 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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