Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
Whether holding an international sports event is beneficial for the country or not is a controversial issue. Both viewpoints are justifiable, but I personally lean towards the former.
Admittedly, organizing an international sports competition benefits us in myriad ways. Firstly, organizers can advertise the country’s culture and wilderness through related videos and sports’ performances. These sport activities can cement the friendship between countries by bringing viewers from different places and ages. As a result, the more visitors are enthusiastic to explore that country, the more financial rewards and profits can be contributed to the country’s economy. Secondly, national athletics can ensure physical strength. For example, spending time adapting to the weather or new time zone is not a barrier for national athletics to handle. Therefore, their physical performances and mental health will be stable and promoted in the best condition.
On the other hand, hosting international sports events may bring some disadvantages. The government has to share their budget in many spendings. For instance, investment in infrastructure and building short-term use of equipment can cause wasting resources and labours. Besides, local businesses will suffer due to major advertisers from other countries. These advertising will affect the nation's market share and customers' selections because big brands from soft drink or sneakers usually sponsor. As a consequence, the economy can undergo a downward trend, which directly impacts the country's wealth.
In conclusion, an international sports event should no doubt be held by a country, but calculating the loss in budget and applying friendly environment devices for the events is also important to thrive the country’s wealth.
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Suggestion:
...portant to thrive the country’s wealth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82954545455 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15497106188 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659090909091 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.251116056 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1875 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191735862092 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605347880124 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719642872752 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131611681779 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391644644833 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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