There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that I heard everywhere nowadays?
some people use more to travel through airway in the world for holiday,work and commercial porposes in recent years.No can one deny , according to me the benfit is that we can travel easy to go anywhere and disadvantage is that so, the flight tickets rate is to mush high so then the both advantages and limitation are with the flights
In the begning through the airway we can easy cover the long distance in few time and that is the best option to export and import the good .to explainly , the large number of goods amount transfer one place to another place in single time . For example , researchers research that the 63 percent people give prefrence to flight for travel and 37 percent peple to give other modes of transpot. result is that airway cover the long time distance in few hours
Secondly, the price of ticket of airway is to mush high as compare to other modes . some people never use airways for the reason of ticket price. some time , when the weather is not clear then airway schedule change and canceled flights and airway is consumed a huge quantity of feul result is that , airway is cause of pollution and globalisation
Conclusion , in the airway both are prons and cons . we can travel easily through airway or it is way of transport and the imition is that so it not eco friendly
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- The world has been an enormous increase in flight for leisure business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years what do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights 56
- There are many different types of music in the world today Why do we need music Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that I heard everywhere nowadays 11
- The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights Do you think flights should be taxed more Give r 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57692307692 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3712989722 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504273504274 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.286115315 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 178.5 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 20.7667163134 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0277515604202 0.244688304435 11% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0119237731138 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0178216026821 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0194764735412 0.151304729494 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135273545574 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 11.3001002004 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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