. WRITE A PARAGRAPH ABOUT WHAT LIFE IN THE CITY IS LIKE.
Life in the big city is full of exciting activity. And it is always busy. In the early morning thousand of people leave their homes in the manner ants do when the nests are broken. Soon all streets are full of people and traffic. Offices and shop open, students flock to schools and the day of work begins. The city now is full of noise with activities. Hundreds of tourists, sight-seers and people visit beautiful places of interest while all businessmen from all parts of the world arrive to transact their business. In evening, day schools and the offices begin to close. Some shops also close. The city is now full life for a rush for buses and many kind of means for transport. Everybody seems to be in a hurry to reach their warm home. Therefore the city could be described as a busy place of ceaseless activity. Here, the drama of life is enacted every day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ities. Hundreds of tourists, sight-seers and people visit beautiful places of int...
^^
Line 1, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...transact their business. In evening, day schools and the offices begin to close. ...
^^
Line 1, column 653, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... now full life for a rush for buses and many kind of means for transport. Everybody seems...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 746, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...be in a hurry to reach their warm home. Therefore the city could be described as a busy p...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4746835443 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28838389463 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5647678582 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.3846153846 112.824112599 48% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1538461538 22.9334400587 53% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109669477275 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399179225328 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566394415112 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109669477275 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 13.2329268293 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.