Keeping in view the importance of fitness, companies should provide time to employees
to participate in sports during the day. What is your opinion on this matter?
It is frequently discussed that whether the companies should provide subsequent amount of period to employees to encourage them in sports activities or not. The offices can consider sporting during the day time as a crucial factor for fitness. In my view, it is essential for worker to attain healthy lifestyle and exercising can benefit the organization in plethora ways.
Although doing yoga or any exercise is always mentioned in the resolution for the year, only few amounts of people might tend to achieve it. The hectic timetable of the industry can be factored for the ignorance in exercising or self-reflecting the health or body. As in regards with different nervous systems related diseases, incorrect posture during long working hours can be a root cause for them. For instance, it has been researched that, mental health problems and the amount of cardiac attacks have been substantially increased over the years. Moreover, it also has been researched that the work timings during the week should not exceed more than 55 hours by doctors.
These health issues can be prevented by considering exercise as a part of one's daily schedule along with the tasks in the work place. For example, with 30 minutes meditation from the pundit the company can start a work day a bit earlier. Such practices will not only benefit the energy of the laborer, but also escalate the productivity range of the organization. Likewise, offices can also yield training sessions related to fitness, advantages of healthy nutrition and mental well-being care.
Overall, the education of physical fitness is vital nowadays. Moreover, production places may also observe the prolific changes in the productivity rate of employees. In my view, acquiring and sustaining the fit lifestyle is essential and it can be beneficial if the companies consider it as a part of daily mandatory tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17049180328 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81608616809 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.1996472638 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.133333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1330580702 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485138999374 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604147057339 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944443315119 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737765785064 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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