Some people say that you can learn more about another country by watching television programmes and films about it than by actually visiting it. How true is this statement? Is there anything you can learn about another country by visiting it that cannot learn by watching programmes and films about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
It is a common belief that people can gain a deep insight into other countries' cultural just with a TV. They can sit at an armchair and on TV and watch all things they want. It is easy to get experiences and did not have to move a lot. But some experiences can not give by watching TV, it just acquire by physical travel.
Admittedly, it is inexpensive, for armchair travellers to learn knowledge from the source of the Internet. This is because some special locations are difficult and expensive such as North Pole, Sahara desert, Antarctica and by watching television films, they can climb the mountain in their minds, even their bodies do not go in. So, travellers can enjoy the joy of exploring a place, a culture or a period of history from the comfort of home.
However, there are some experiences that tourist can only receive from physical travel. They can act throughout the entire day, like exploring caves, going to the forest, join fun activities or just generally exploring.Most of the time, travellers probably won’t even notice that they are working their muscles more frequently because they are so excited to learn about the new destination.
Besides, people believe that culture can be best understood when one physically visit that place. Proponents of this viewpoint argue that films and books do not cover all the aspects and often shows only positive attributes and customs of a place. Cultural values and traditions are best analysed when we live with them and participate in their festivals and other events. Moreover, they say that books and the internet give us limited information and physical presence in instrumental to observe and understand their emotion, feelings,and so on showcased during different occasions.
In conclusion, it seems to me that television can help people to know about distinct areas and regions on Earth, but there are still many situations that only travel directly offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 965.302439024 168% => OK
No of words: 322.0 196.424390244 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02795031056 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 3.73543355544 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70888108395 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 106.607317073 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 283.868780488 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8609965312 43.030603864 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.642857143 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197239344958 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064481344745 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407056748344 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10823735548 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214457390741 0.0819641961636 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 40.7170731707 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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