There is a trend of increasing competitiveness in today’s society. In your opinion, is it a good or a bad development?
There is a trend of increasing competitiveness in today’s society. In your opinion, is it a good or a bad development?
These days witness an upward trend in competitiveness as more competitions are held in the community. While some pessimists suppose that the phenomenon affects the society negatively, I am of the opinion that it is a good development.
On the one hand, there are many downsides of the increase in competitiveness. Firstly, when more competitions are held, the standard to achieve success is likely to rise. Some competitors may find it impossible to complete the target so they tend to not make an effort to reach success. As a consequence, their productivity may be comparatively low which can affect the business growth. Moreover, when the standards are raised, some people may encounter stress and anxiety so they push themselves too hard in working and studying. This action can have a detrimental effect on one's health as they may suffer strain because of lacking exercise and relaxation.
On the other hand, more competitiveness also has many benefits to our community. It activates a sense of excitement within one competitor. To explain, when one witnesses others' achievement, he is fed a constant supply of ambition, so he tends to work hard to accomplish goals. It is considered a motivation to make one try his best to be more productive. As a result, competitiveness can boost the world's progress so that the living standard of humans can become better. A student, for instance, when encountering a competition, may study hard to gain the award so the study performance of that student can be improved gradually.
In conclusion, the growth of competitiveness can lead to one's health problems or the inefficiency of a company. However, I believe that its benefits outweigh its drawbacks since competitiveness betters humans' living standard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e growth of competitiveness can lead to ones health problems or the inefficiency of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32853685408 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565359477124 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5049692404 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225759967022 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903367581734 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153770790031 0.0667982634062 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238161713112 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.301123926521 0.056905535591 529% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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