Some individuals think that working from home, while of benefit to employees, is actually a drawback to employers. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, due to the rise of Covid 19 cases in numerous countries and regions, working from home is a permanent and indispensable part of our daily basis. However, there is an argument stated that working from home is only beneficial for the employer, not for the workers. In my opinion, the employee can also take full advantage of working from home.
The spread of telecommunication technology such as using the internet, mobile phones has opened up new opportunities for employees and employers to carry tasks even if they are not in the same building together. Some tools use Artificial intelligence for the bosses to keep track of their employee's working hours and calculate their KPI. For instance, right now employee can run their company project in the bedroom without having to rush to go to the company early. Moreover, the rise of Covid 19 cases has been significantly dangerous for workers and employees. As soon as everyone is vaccinated, working from home is the best choice to keep safe for the community.
There are several drawbacks that we need to look at from working from home. By allowing employees to work from home, there will be a lack of face-to-face communication and meetings that help the company to comprehend the same idea. Furthermore, the working environment at home can also be a disadvantage because it is an environment designed to rest more than to work 8 hours a day. Employees can easily feel tired and bored from working at home.
To conclude, it is clear that working from home brings a lot of benefits to employers as well as employees. Although there are several drawbacks that we should get over, the advantages of working from home for an employee currently outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93515358362 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88914653513 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532423208191 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.373367146 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275399535353 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116994674794 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643388485912 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194172476372 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547002373145 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.