Peple naturally resist makig changes in their lives. What kind of problem can this cause? What solutions?
While life is changing dramatically, many people tend to refuse to make changes in their lives. This widespread problem has long been a major topic of concern in society. Although this trend will have some undoubtedly consequences, people can take steps to solute these potential problems.
To begin with,several relates problems can be anticipated when people resist making changes. Firstly, individuals who do not accept to make changes must be obsolete with modern life. They would have difficulty in adapting to continuous Revolutions such as: technology, machines.... Morever, people resisting making changes have to deal with more stress, dispair and nervousness. As the result, they could have negative atitude and fail easily. Finally, refusing to break the rules has bad effects on social developement.
On the other hand, there are several actions that could be taken to solve the problems. First, people should learn how toaccept to change and adjust to modern life. It means that people have to get rid of prejudices and conservative mind. A second mesure would be updating new productions of Revolution regularly. Finally, trying to break oneself limits is also an effective way. For example, it is suggested to be brave to try something that is have never tried instead of being scared.
In conclusion, resisting making changes lead to several consequences. Nevertheless, there are mesures that can be taken to solve the problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34934497817 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83444799911 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655021834061 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.9950395489 49.4020404114 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.0588235294 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4705882353 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12935585089 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423447377651 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452852005148 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0959918994359 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585214602545 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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