Statistics suggest that nowadays an increasing number of crimes are commited by the young people . What is causes and how can we solve this problem .
Recently , it is an extremely shocking situation that a massive number of youngsters involved in crime is increasing day by day . This essay will analyse reasons and suggest some solutions .
There are multifarious reasons why the juvenile delinquency rate is going up . First and foremost , multimedia is one of the main causes leading to uncontrolled behaviour of youngsters . Teenagers watch programs with violent content shown on TV or play pugnacious games which are a powerful influence . Not only could youngsters be vulnerable about the psychology but they also imitate the violent behaviour and do harm to people around . Secondly , family is also a core reason for young criminal problems . In some families parents tend to spend most of their time on working hard to make ends meet and they do not care for their children . So these teenagers are easy to be induced to commit crime . Thus , it seems that crimes are committed by the youngsters , which has negative influence on society .
However , there are many effective solutions to tackle with the problem of young offenders . One way to deal with this is to ensure that all violent programs cannot be shown on TV . In addition , parents should have more supervision to their children , they ought to deter their children from playing fighting games . Instead of playing these kinds of games , youngsters had better spend much more on learning and taking part in volunteer works . Moreover , youngsters ,who lack of affection and attention , should have been carefully taken care of and educated by their parents.
In conclusion , the problem of young criminals is really exigent and the governments should pay more attention to reform the education and law system for youngsters .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16370106762 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73657003703 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4948766189 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6875 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1390417377 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469529789658 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044396866436 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923299703199 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516128973565 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.