There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter: describe the problems explain how these problems are affecting you and others suggest what could be done about it Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the transport service provided by you in my city.
It has been nearly a month since I and the people of my hometown are encountering some issues regarding the transport system. Firstly, there is no proper departure and arrival time of buses. Secondly, these vehicles are overcrowded and not good in condition.
As a result, people have to wait for a long time and often reach late at their work due to improper timing, which also affects their salaries. Due to bad conditions, the masses have to face many uncomfortable incidents while traveling. Most important, women are the ones who suffer the most.
A reputable company like yours need to make a huge change for improving the quality of transport. To do this, you can increase the number of buses, especially those which go out of the city. You also need to deploy an inspection committee to check the schedule of buses. Apart from this, you should also pay attention to the condition of buses, so that people can travel without any trouble.
I hope you will take this matter into your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86868686869 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63165724111 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676767676768 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9479976871 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1538461538 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2307692308 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53846153846 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176046668498 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556838223766 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475326191377 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994618937216 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556326499986 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.