Although human activities as well as natural events are responsible for global warming. Natural events creat more global warming than human activities.
Global warming is rise in average temperature of earth's atmosphere. It has increased from past and become a serious world wide problem. No doubt human activities and natural events both are responsible for it. But it is wrong or unfair to say that natural events are more responsible for global warming. I disagree with this view.
Natural events involve in temperature rise in more than one way. Firsty, some times forests catch fire by friction of trees and lightning from clouds. During such condition large area of forest destroy by burning giving lot of heat to atmosphere. It leads to temper...
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Sentence: Nowadays people use large number of vehicles oprating on fuel.
Error: oprating Suggestion: operating
Sentence: In addition this when fuel burns it produse massive amount of smoke making environment unhealthy and hot.
Error: produse Suggestion: produce
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