“Government funding should never be used to support art that the majority of the
population finds distasteful or objectionable.”
Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider whether the above statement is always
true or whether there are exceptions to it.
Should Government funding be used to support art that are distasteful to the majority of the population? Some would argue that arts are essential to preserve the history and culture of a society no matter how distasteful they are. Others believe that exception should be made if such art goes against the interest of the public and argue that some histories are better off forgotten. In my view, Government funding should not be used for supporting arts that are distasteful to the population because safeguarding taxpayer's interest should be on top of their priority list. I am also of the opinion that any government that finances art that is distasteful to the people deserves to be chastised.
The statue of George Washington, an erstwhile president of the United State of America was recently pulled down during the Black Lives Matter (BLM) Movement that erupted across the major cities of the country over the killing of an unarmed black man accused of spending fake note. Yes, something as trivial as that. Many believed he would not have been killed if he was white and this prompted the damage of statues which stand as a figure of white supremacy. George Washington was believed to be a notorious slave master who ensured that whites have more privileges and enjoy better representation. This past record of his is appalling to the present population and would rather not have his statue displayed in public spaces. It would be bad for any government to continue to channel taxpayer's money to such arts that are distasteful to the population.
Also, consider the clamour by the majority of the populace in United Kingdom that arts which were stolen or obtained by other immoral means, and which do not have root in the history of the society should be returned to their places of origin. Huge number of artefacts with root source in Benin, Nigeria now find their place in several museums across United Kingdom with little or no explanation as to how they were acquired except that they were carted away during the colonial era. This is a good example of cases where taxpayer's money is used to safeguard arts the population find distasteful because they have little or no connection with them.
In conclusion, it is clear that Government has no right to fund arts the population find distasteful with taxpayer's money. The statue of George Washington that was pulled down during the Black Lives Matter Movement and Clamour against museums across United Kingdom getting filled with stolen artefacts are exceptional examples of why it is morally and constitutionally wrong for government to support art the population find objectionable with taxpayer's money.
- Government funding should never be used to support art that the majority of the population finds distasteful or objectionable Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above In developing and supporting your position you should consider 66
- Government funding should never be used to support art that the majority of the population finds distasteful or objectionable Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above In developing and supporting your position you should consider 83
- Government funding should never be used to support art that the majority of the population finds distasteful or objectionable Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above In developing and supporting your position you should consider 66
- Government funding should never be used to support art that the majority of the population finds distasteful or objectionable Write an essay in which you take a position on the statement above In developing and supporting your position you should consider 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 650, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...have little or no connection with them. In conclusion, it is clear that Governme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 445.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00898876404 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6731184839 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462921348315 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 703.8 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8710333397 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.3125 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8125 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263278244776 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110275504115 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124765935843 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167274155898 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0940436604261 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.