The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style.what are the advantages of this trend?Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?
Due to the growth in convenience foods such as packed and ready made foods favoured the individuals to cope up with the speed of current life trends. This essay will discuss both benefits and downsides of rise in convenience food with relevant examples.
first of all, the main drawback of this current trend is low quality food. which means the amount of required vitamins and protiens for daily consumption may not be fullfilled. further more, health of the people get effected. to illustrate this , in UK at first when ready made food introduced in food stalls
depite the disadvantages above , there are benefits as well. such as the time required for preperation of food becomes less hence people can focus on other things. another merit is consumption of food becomes easy. for examle\
In conlucion,there are numerous advantages than drawbacks whcih are time was saved and ease of food consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, may, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12666666667 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74876420231 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 231.3 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7398004098 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264896265031 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949991534778 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061906753346 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140630680926 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706074672647 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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