Wallet
Dear Sana,
I would like to inform you that i have reached safely at home yesterday afternoon and just want to say thanks and tell you that the last week was great as i got a chance to finally spend some time with you. we explored alot in Himachal and our me time was the best part in that trip.
I am missing the fun we had, the places we explored, the food we had, the people we met and the adventure we did was great. we lived that week the fullest.
By the was i while unpacking the luggage today I noticed that my wallet is missing. it seems i forget that in your house because i remember i got my stuff ready and came for breakfast in dining area and there i kept it on the table and forgot. I have my important documents like driving license, Office ID card and credit cards in that wallet which i will be required quite often.
I would want you to courier me the wallet as soon as possible. Since its a wallet and important documents are there so please do not take any risk and send it via safe courier. you can send the wallet through bluedart services and opt for fast option availble. I hope you have my address still here i am writing the proper address so you can check one DJ house, Building 04th, Bangalore Karnataka, 56000. please do not forget to mention my contact number also mention the alternate one too
Once you dispatch the courier please share the tracking number with me so that i will keep an eye on that also will keep you once i recieved the courier
Thankyou
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ell you that the last week was great as i got a chance to finally spend some time...
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Line 2, column 208, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...ce to finally spend some time with you. we explored alot in Himachal and our me ti...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...met and the adventure we did was great. we lived that week the fullest. By the ...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ay I noticed that my wallet is missing. it seems i forget that in your house becau...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ced that my wallet is missing. it seems i forget that in your house because i rem...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ems i forget that in your house because i remember i got my stuff ready and came ...
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Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t that in your house because i remember i got my stuff ready and came for breakfa...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... for breakfast in dining area and there i kept it on the table and forgot. I have...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d and credit cards in that wallet which i will be required quite often. I would...
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Line 6, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uired quite often. I would want you to courier me the wallet as soon as possibl...
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Line 6, column 71, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e the wallet as soon as possible. Since its a wallet and important documents are th...
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Line 6, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o not take any risk and send it via safe courier. you can send the wallet through...
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Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...any risk and send it via safe courier. you can send the wallet through bluedart se...
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Line 6, column 302, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... I hope you have my address still here i am writing the proper address so you ca...
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Line 6, column 408, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...lding 04th, Bangalore Karnataka, 56000. please do not forget to mention my contact num...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...are the tracking number with me so that i will keep an eye on that also will keep...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 32.9175257732 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 286.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23776223776 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15792910618 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 290.88556701 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.600410248 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167396354673 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881118389702 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106995355639 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806717286314 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0989342250871 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.