Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, schools become the most crucial area to develop the students in the right path. However, due to some children it pave the way for bullying in earlier life itself. This essay will describe the causes and solution for this action.
Way of children's upbringing by the parents and the lack of awareness in the school act as a prominent role in the increasement of bullying nowadays. Firstly, many experts claim that children's attitude is determined by the parents as they spent most of the hours with them. For instance, if a child is living under the condition where the parents are using aggressive and abusing words. That child automatically adopt the manner of parents which results the child to show the same attitude in the school against other children. Secondly, some of the schools rather teaching the moral values to the children, concentrating only on the academic part. Due to this children fail to understand the difference between the pleasant and unpleasant words.
To eradicate the problems of bullying in the schools, two major solution is needed. Parents must educate their offsprings with good qualities. If a mistake is corrected in the young age of the children, it never rises into a critical problem. Then schools must conduct seperate classes to teach the moral values to the students. Punichshment should be given if any student invlove in the action of bullying. For example, a survey report says that majority of the children involve in the bullying without knowing the despicable effects in that. Hence, if the children is thought about the effects of bullying, they will not involve in that.
To conclude, parents and schools should take equal responsibilities to change the youngster's behaviour in the right-way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paves'?
Suggestion: paves
... path. However, due to some children it pave the way for bullying in earlier life it...
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Line 3, column 538, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...chool against other children. Secondly, some of the schools rather teaching the moral value...
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Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youngsters'' or 'youngster's'?
Suggestion: youngsters'; youngster's
...ke equal responsibilities to change the youngsters behaviour in the right-way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05821917808 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68998292985 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551369863014 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.267838606 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8823529412 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117112165643 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407437877533 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369752320944 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747182249228 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424185662263 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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