Write a narrative essay about an interesting place (village/city...) you have been to.
I still remember the trip to Dalat the most. This place is known as the city of fog or the city of thousands of flowers. It brought back good memories for me. This city also brings me a lot of joy and nostalgia.
2 years ago I had a trip to Da Lat city with my family. The weather was very nice that day. During the journey from Bac Lieu to Da Lat I was very excited. When I just arrived in Da Lat city, I was both tired but also excited to come to this beautiful city. I love watching the fog here. The feeling of cold makes me so excited that I can still feel it.
Everything is attractive and poetic.I have seen flowers everywhere, all the time, even in a crack of the wall.I also lost my way and when I asked the locals they were willing to guide me. The hospitality of the people here makes me love this place even more.The landscapes of this fog city such as Gold Stream lake, Langbian lake, Tuyen Lam lake ... are not only sublime but also poetic, and romantic. I watched the pine forests, walked along the lake shores to immerse myself in the majestic nature. I also visited the strawberry gardens. The beautiful and crimson berries are extremely attractive.
When I sat at the coffee shop with my family enjoying the beauty of this city, I was immersed in the music and romance here.By the time I left, the scent of flowers and dew seemed to linger on my shirt. I thought that Da Lat was holding on to my footsteps.
To this day, I still remember the feeling of coming to that beautiful city. The memories that come flooding back make me miss them even more. If I have free time, I will come to Da Lat again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23151125402 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21927298542 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536977491961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8283495472 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.6666666667 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.8095238095 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0616228517986 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0195088447177 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390634493306 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0397021467815 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373302638125 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.0946893788 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 12.4159519038 54% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.