Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In the current progressive sophisticated world where we live, the importance of being aware of the news is no secret to anyone. While many people assert that it is essential to get the world’s news, others believe otherwise and think it is enough to know just about the news that is important for their personal life. I concur with the latter group for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that the world is full of bad news. Although most of this news is not directly related to individuals’ life, but may have harmful effects on their minds and consequently causes serious problems in their personal life. For example, if a person who lives in the United States reads breaking news about an airplane crash in Germany, he might become sad about the event while it was not related to him or his relatives. Therefore, since a part of his mind is involved in the crashing event unconsciously, he cannot focus on his job. As a result, his performance will decrease and gets into trouble in his occupation which might directly affect his personal life and relationship with his family.
Furthermore, another equally remarkable point is that in the current progressive world where everything changes so quickly, time is gold and it is not proper to waste valuable time by following the news which happens far away around the world and doesn’t affect our life. It is better to spend this precious time on more important tasks like learning new skills, hanging out with family or friends, or even doing a hobby for enjoying life rather than following unrelated news. Following the news is enough as long as you are aware of what is happening around you and can handle your personal life, more than this is just wasting time.
By taking into account all the above reasons, I believe that it is not essential to be aware of news all around the world. It is because most of the news is not related to our life not only bothers our spirit unconsciously but also wastes our valuable time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.725 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53723961749 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4342229449 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.846153846 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6923076923 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205215738015 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074916354864 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438092613641 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120369640283 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614293203331 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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