The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagram demonstrates the process of producing tea, and how a cup of tea is made.
Overall, the process consists of 18 stages in the picture, beginning with the tea seeds is grown in India and China and ending up with the product’s a cup of tea.
Initially, the tea seeds are sown then the sunshine makes plants are grown from the tea seeds. The step after this, all of the tea leaves are picked and put into baskets by the farmers. Once the tea leaves have dried, all of them are packed into boxes. Subsequently, these boxes are loaded onto a lorry, which is delivered supermarkets.
In order to drink a cup of tea, the customers must buy a box of tea in the supermarkets and take it home. Later on, water is filled in the kettle and put into the stove to boil. Meanwhile, a tea bag is dropped into the cup and once the kettle has boiled, the water is poured into the cup. During this time, you wait for two minutes and the tea bag is removed, while milk and sugar are added into the cup of tea. Once the final stage has been completed, you can enjoy drinking a cup of hot tea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...rom the tea seeds. The step after this, all of the tea leaves are picked and put into bask...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23557692308 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25418229805 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533653846154 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3924607316 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0909090909 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.36363636364 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287533132707 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126594100763 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966301692915 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217245861284 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893795706618 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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