Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In the present day with advances in globalization and technologies, climate change has been increasingly present in our life. Although some people claim the population should mitigate its impacts, others believe in the opposite idea. I agree with society should fight for a cleaner world thinking in the next generations. This essay will discuss both views and I will explain better my opinion.
On the one hand, the world is claiming help due to the consequences of climate change. Some people believe that the population just should learn to live with these negative results but I disagree about this idea. If every person would do a thin part, in the end, we would have great and ambitious results because small actions can be valuable and essential. In addition, for example, if each person thinks that it help is inefficient, nobody will help. The more aware people, the more help and better actions we will have.
The population needs to strive to fight for the planet. Not only ordinary individuals but also large companies, governments, and influential organizations should endorse the importance of taking care of the planet. Owing to climate change, lands are been cleared which leads to the presence of deforestation and desertification even more ubiquitous. As a result, animals and vegetation are decreasing in number because of a lack of natural habitat, furthermore, people are losing their homes and suffering from droughts and flooding. Is not acceptable to think this phenomenon is normal and thus we just should wait without any effort. I claim society must do any effort to change this complex and sad reality.
In conclusion, climate change has been transforming the world into an uninhabitable site. Whether individuals do not anything to overcome this situation, consequences in the coming years will be inevitable. Hence, I agree the population should fight to save the planet. This essay argued both views of different opinions about climate change and I explained my opinion in more detail.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17682926829 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83464454502 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2724004481 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3684210526 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2631578947 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296218220532 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812125872503 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663343628479 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183544113031 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829532031254 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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