Popular sporting occasions help to maintain the peace and a better relationship between the countries but it would remain intact unless and until participants keep it a healthy competition. Therefore I partly agree to the statement.
Till few decade back, wars between countries did nothing but created chaos, unnecessary loss of lives, waste of resources and international tensions. But now time has changed, World Cup and different sporting events are organized to create a healthy relationship among the countries. These are kind of wars with certain rules and restricted with time. There is no loss of lives, rather the resources are utilized properly and talents of people are channelized in a proper manner. Some countries win the title and some lose, but this defeat helps to do better in the next event. For example Olympics are organized every 5 years. By participating in these competitions we get to know about different people from different countries and it also helps to understand their culture and traditions. Apart from that representing our country on international level is the most proud thing one could ever experience.
But on their other hand the greed to win the competitions forces the participant to use illegal way or by heinous means. For example some participants bribe the judges or the referee to give the decision on their side. Apart from this, sometimes participants get addicted to weed and drugs which not only depletes their health but also leads to disobeying rules of the tournament. Also abusing other players, bullying them and using profane language with judges, organizers and participants’ results in disharmony with other countries.
Therefore in conclusion, I think popular events and international tournaments help to maintain the peace and harmony internationally, but restrictions should be more strict to stop illegal means to win a competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, apart from, for example, i think, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 965.302439024 145% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29433962264 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00467417996 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 106.607317073 156% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4587513021 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.923076923 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161394607797 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489505940879 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409735138107 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104858538397 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321878272307 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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