Many people nowadays don't feel safe either when they are at home or go out. What are the reasons? What can we do to solve this problem?
Safety is always one of the fundamental demands of humans, but people currently feel threatened due to several reasons. I suggest a number of solutions for this problem.
These are several reasons why people now have to face serious risks no matter where they are. Firstly, the number of criminal cases in various forms has increased, which can be explained by poverty. This fact is evidenced by Maslow’s demand tower that people need to satisfy their physiological needs like food or accommodation. Secondly, due to the climate change that is happening all around the world, people might face the danger of natural disasters even when they are at their own home. It has been illustrated in northern Vietnam that for the first time in a long period of over eighty years this country has a sleet on the first day of January following the Lunar calendar. Following this year, Vietnam also suffered the worst flooding in history, it made hundreds of thousands of houses broken and more than hundreds of people died.
Since such issues are serious, the government and individuals should take steps immediately to address these problems. The authorities should take action to reduce the rate of poor people owing to the fact that the more poverty is declined the more criminal proportion will decrease. One of these methods is tight management tax, which will be prevented by the recently not paying taxes, such as the case “Pandora papers” which makes the government to limit the state budget in helping poor families. Additionally, individuals should enhance their cognitive and behaviors to protect the environment. People not only dispose of garbage in the right place but also limit the use of nylon bags.
In conclusion, there are some explanations why people feel unsafe even when they are at home, and steps need to be taken to tackle criminal and environmental obstacles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04807692308 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64989292764 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1315866333 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161217462956 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527103198298 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471398662239 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107191034566 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539437780989 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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