The the diagram below show the stages and equipment used in cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Director design elucidate the data related to the manufacturing cement which Father used for constructing buildings as a concrete comprised of various types and tools as well as different ingredients used in the overview of diagram make a s species that production of cement and concrete comprises of several process in stage to begin with limestone and clay actress together through freshers with turns into fine particles although a rotating a mixture is linked with a rotating heater with the help of iron rod furthermore the Powder than damned to mixer and rotate where constant heat is supplied eventually these materials are father turns into powder for from grinders needleless cement is produced and packed in bags on the other hand concrete production and required some basic mathematical calculation for cement with 15% water 10% and 25% and small stones are highest among all which is 50% added all together to use vessel shaped container known as concrete mixer which rotate in anticlockwise direction hands concrete is produced to recapitulate two different diagram illustrating the action of essential raw materials used in building infrastructure moreover cement manufacturing is quite difficult because of various steps compared to the other one
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ts used in the overview of diagram make a s species that production of cement and...
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Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
... that production of cement and concrete comprises of several process in stage to begin with ...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun process seems to be countable; consider using: 'several processes'.
Suggestion: several processes
...ion of cement and concrete comprises of several process in stage to begin with limestone and cl...
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Line 1, column 1072, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'diagram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'diagrams'.
Suggestion: diagrams
... produced to recapitulate two different diagram illustrating the action of essential ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35175879397 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88538495302 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613065326633 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 199.0 22.4926829268 885% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1065.0 112.824112599 944% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 199.0 22.9334400587 868% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 5.23603664747 1547% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255690169502 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.255690169502 0.103423049105 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255690169502 0.15604864568 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 103.3 13.2329268293 781% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -138.97 61.2550243902 -227% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 82.1 10.3012195122 797% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.93 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.27 8.06136585366 227% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 81.6 10.9970731707 742% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 82.0 11.0658536585 741% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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