Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Playing games together is a good way to build closer relationships.
Some people believe that playing games will not help to build relationship, as they believe by decieding winners and losers in games people are eventually developing competition among each other. However, in my opinion, I do agree with the stance that good friends can be made by playing games together. There are there reasons for my opinion:
First of all, by playing games participants gets a chance to share there thought process among each other, through this they can find similar minded people. Drawing from my own experience, when i used to play cricket to discuss strategy my team's player usually discuss there ideas for winning and by this process i get to know many people having same thoughts and opinion exactly like i posits. This collaboration increased my team's synergy and i make many new friends.
Secondly, games like monopoly, hide and seek, bingo, ludo, etc. increases the bonding among the palyers by talking to each other. When I was around 5yr old, there is community match for monopoly in my society and the duration for the game was 4hr. Between these 4hr we talk about things from our school to the new character introduced in kids daily soap. This helps us to build a strong interaction.
Finally, online multiplayer games like PUBG, Valorant, Fortnite, etc. help players to spend large amount of time with each other and understand better.
In conclusion, beacause of the above stated reasons stronger relationships can be formed by just playing games .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, as for, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 248.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99193548387 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52862836093 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 618.680645161 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7152774787 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2307692308 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173328598037 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624620428921 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686693964814 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104367636572 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744430890139 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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