some people think health care should be free for everyone, others think that people should pay for their medical costs themselves. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is argued by some people that we deserve medical services without any cost, whereas others opine that these services provided by medical centres with remuneration. In my point of view, medical services should free for everyone, however, its maintenance cost is higher, thus confer burden towards the government.
On the one hand, citizens elementary rights to get better health care services. This is because, citizens pay their hefty amount of earnings to the government through taxes. If government concerns for their puipil, they will feel more motivate and accelerate to serve for country. To exemplify, during the COVID 9 pandemic Bangldesh government provide free vaccination to their people and also offer free online advices from renowned doctors. In addition, developing countries people use their earnings in food, education and shelter and they do not enough money to run their expensive medical services. Needless to say that, governments bound to give this services without any payment.
On the other hand, high maintenance cost and installation of expensive equipment create obstacles for medical centres as well as government also. What I mean by this is that to drive the hospitals or diagnostic centres need monthly operational cost, moreover, medicine cost, doctors payment and other staff payments also includes with this. So if citizens pay against services, it will support hospitals to provide better services. Apart from that, today's globalized world people is paid larger amount for latest mobile or other technological gadgets, so they also give attention towards medical payment, what is crucial and relate with their survival. Take Singapore, as an example, every year they spend their one fifth portion of money in medical services.
In conclusion, although medical services take huge amount money from governmnet, but this services should be free, because it relatess with basic needs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 141, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, apart from, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47315436242 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61697853272 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1801892759 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273253103581 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914339117864 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447796061364 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165624138564 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406055070207 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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