Professional sportspeople are often idolized by young people. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree?
Expert athletes are usually admired by the young generation. It is believed by some people that as a result, they are responsible to be good models for young people to look at. In my opinion, I agree with said statement
First of all, the reason why sportspeople should be in charge of being good models for young people is that the young generation is affected by them. Since children have a special feeling and appreciation for their idols, they tend to want to protect and mimic them; hence, what sportspeople do and speak can influence their own actions, way of thinking, and lifestyle. For example, a lot of young people purchase outfits or items in similar designs to their idols to show their adoration for them. Secondly, it’s the professional athletes’ responsibility to set excellent examples for the young as athletes can help to inspire them. The enthusiasm and positive energy of professional sportspeople can become a source of inspiration for children. For example, by watching a football match, young people can be motivated by the passionate and determined players to work harder, never give up and stop trying in their own life, like how the players recover after every time they make a mistake on the field.
To conclude, I firmly believe that it’s the sportspeople’s responsibility to set good models for young people. This is because the young generation is heavily impacted by professional athletes and being good examples will help to inspire them to be more diligent in their own field or job
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- Professional sportspeople are often idolized by young people Some people think that they therefore have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children Do you agree or disagree 56
- Professional sportspeople are often idolized by young people Some people think that they therefore have a responsibility to be good role models at all times for children Do you agree or disagree 78
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... my opinion, I agree with said statement First of all, the reason why sportspeopl...
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... more diligent in their own field or job
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01953125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86434154993 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5102645543 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.5 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402876080984 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173559447255 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113501068181 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291498473987 0.151304729494 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0633785373388 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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