Some people say that TV advertisements are helpful for viewers, while others disagree. Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.
TV advertisements are not strange to people whose pastime is watching television. However, advertisements have their own strengths and weaknesses, which will be discussed in the below paragraphs.
On the first hand, advertisements on television bring several obvious benefits to both the manufacturers and the consumers. this can be explained that the manufacturers create their own precious chances to recommend their products to more and more audiences who may be their potential customers. The more people are informed about the products, the more easily the companies sell them, increasing the sales rate. also, advertisements deliver beneficial information of the latest products to the consumers, which helps them have more awareness to consider which issue will the most appropriate choice for them and their families.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of thTV advertisements are unavoidable, which affects not only the audiences but also the manufacturers. It is deniable that an advertisement costs more than people suppose. For example, 40 million VND is the figure for a 30-second advertisement at about 6:00 A.M to 6:55 A.M at the time of "Good morning" (Chao Buoi Sang) on VTV3, the Vietnamese national channel. Additionally, to approach more audiences, a certain advertisement can go on the air on separate channels. Therefore, the amount of money the companies use for advertising is unimaginable. Nevertheless, the companies' attempts to make their products popular can be counteracted because of the fact that advertisements in the middle of people's favorite programs can annoy them. Besides, the frequency density a kind of advertisements has, the more negative feelings the audiences have about the products, which no manufacturer desires.
In a word, advertisements on television are considered one of the most appreciable methods to introduce new products in business although there are still some down sides of this method. Consequently, if a company supposes advertising as their best marketing activity, they should be aware of the counteracting effect to get their desirable results.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, still, therefore, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57894736842 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34135628017 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572755417957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6002491274 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.133333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16216831161 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636857800787 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350314714189 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105230725331 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392779698064 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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