People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems Give your opinion

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People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other
vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

it is widely believed that one effective solution for the government to tackle environmental issues is o increase petrol price. While this view is valid to a certain extent, I believe that there are many other solutions, which are more effective than this should be used.

On the one hand, it is easy to understand why many people put a strain on the authority to impose taxes on fuel. it is because to many budget-conscious consumers, the option of raising taxes will make them think twice about using their money to purchase petrol since if they decided to buy these expensive energy resources, they would either lose their money or their financial status would be affected. this will lead to the fact that they tend to increase the frequency of using some kinds of environmentally-friendly vehicles instead.

On the other hand, it seems to me that there are many more efficient methods for the government to use to solve the pressing problem with the environment. Firstly, public transport should be drawn attention to deal with this issues. To elaborate, by using more some types of public transit, namely buses, subways, train, and so on, people not only can commute freely but also can reduce a huge amount of exhaust fumes, discharged when people driving their private vehicles. Secondly, encouraging people to work from home is also a sound solution for these problems. this is because allowing people to work from home can reduce the commute of people who regularly have to drive to work for a long distance, leading to the fact that by doing this, the government can improve the air quality as well as lower the risk of global warming.

In conclusion, although increasing the price of fuel is beneficial at a certain level, I believe that there are several different more effective methods that should be taken to address the issue of the environment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90220820189 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76136435465 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.4510946311 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.272727273 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8181818182 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229513586234 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905282610865 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567488292491 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128525617686 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299807132388 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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