It is sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Do you agree?
While some people believe that the size of the salary offered is a key factor when they choose a career. However, I disagree with the opinion given, because I think that other factors are equally important.
On the one hand, I believe that individuals require money in order to achieve their basic necessities. We all need money to pay for things like housing, food, bills, health care, and education, for example. Most people consider it a top priority to at least earn enough money to meet these expenses and maintain a respectable standard of living. People may struggle to maintain themselves if they choose employment based on enjoyment or other non-financial motives. For example, artists and musicians are known for picking a professional path that they enjoy, but this does not always provide them with enough income to live comfortably and have a family.
On the other hand, I suppose that other factors are equally as essential as how much money we make at our employment. To begin with, while picking a profession, personal interactions and the culture in the workplace are quite crucial. Having a decent boss or pleasant coworkers, for example, can make a significant impact on employees' happiness and well-being. Moreover, rather than the money they earn, many people's sentiments of job satisfaction are based on their professional accomplishments, the skills they develop, and the status they achieve. Lastly, some people pick a profession so that they can help others and make a meaningful contribution to society.
In conclusion, whereas high salaries definitely influence people's career choices, I do not feel that money is the most important motive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While some people believe that the size of th...
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Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...require money in order to achieve their basic necessities. We all need money to pay for things li...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
... hand, I suppose that other factors are equally as essential as how much money we make at ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ample, can make a significant impact on employees happiness and well-being. Moreover, rat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, while, at least, for example, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17343173432 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8630406345 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.797600163 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116028146353 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429764558803 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065620085861 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105001180371 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0839111087426 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.